Bent Poem by David Blake
Bent
Somewhere between where I am and should
be I find solace in what used to be. Naked
alone in the dark your smile is more than I
can stand. Scared of being put back
together I can’t sleep, painting pictures in
shades of purple and gray. Braking into
pieces that aren’t meant to every be rejoined
you touch me and I no longer lament but still
don’t understand.
Your first line is superb. As is 'I no longer lament but still don't understand' The rest, though a little messy, gets your message across loud and clear. You share your vulnerability with originality and sensitivity. I'd like to read more. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
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4/23/2024 10:25:25 PM # 1.0.0.1119
enjoyed the read smiffy