David Blake

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Dawn - Poem by David Blake

Somewhere in the darkness,
though I have tried I lost your
love. Growing colder, the
passion of the past can never
be undone. In the lonely
light of everything that can
now never be, I await your
return. Pretending not to see,
I bow my head knowing all is
lost. Lamenting the passage
of time, it is only in your memory
that I will ever be set free.


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  • (11/14/2008 11:58:00 PM)

    Very beautiful poem (Report)Reply

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  • (11/27/2007 6:10:00 PM)

    Well David, this is a very beautifuly written - a piece of a real poetry :)
    I hope you'll see hope with every dawn.
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  • (11/17/2007 1:21:00 AM)

    Ah, David, i so identify with this one. Been in the same situation, and it is horrible.
    Love your poetry, as it is coming straight from your heart!
    Theo
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, November 17, 2007

Poem Edited: Monday, April 25, 2011


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