Best Thing I Ever Did… Poem by Louise Tredoux

Best Thing I Ever Did…



Rudi asked me to
play with … …
I couldn’t do it
at first

But I practiced
for him -
I would do
anything

For him –
it was free of charge
wouldn’t hurt anyone
only required that I

Let go of the
false values and
weird upbringing
I was blessed with…

I had to drink
some alcohol
in order to be able
to play with … …

I did it tonight
successfully
seeing his reaction
turned it into

One of the best
things I ever did
in all of my
life…

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Colin Jeffery 25 August 2008

This is such a good poem. Great work indeed.

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Aaron Tate 12 July 2008

.....Hmm like beer this requires and aqcuired taste..

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