Sunday, November 19, 2017
Betrayal Comments
Rating: ★5.0
During my youth I was okay,
And tried to do things the proper way.
I was proud to be honest and straight,
Yet on one occasion I did deviate.
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Chinedu Dike
19 November 2017
A well texted and nicely thought out poem, embellished in poetic rhyme and rhythm. Deep feelings elegantly brought forth with insight. Thanks for sharing Raymond.
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2/28/2026 2:56:59 PM # 1.0.0
A fabulous poem, amazing flow rhyming too. Let me quote....But the one thing that I still fear, Is the pain within each sad tear. I'll never have the nerve it takes, To bear pain for two hearts that break. - A see a promising poet here to amuse the whole world! Many congratulations dear poet! !
Thank you so much fellow poet for taking the time to read and write those comments.