Friday, July 5, 2019

Betrayal Comments

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Looking for the rawness in a storm,
The wave of peace betrayed.
Remembering the pledges thee made,
The flame burnt my eyesight.
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Aqib Javid Bhat
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Dr Antony Theodore 10 June 2020

The soul within thy self is wailing, Waiting to be loved by a broken spirit. I can't bear the wagging tongues anymore, Let me listen to that voice again.The wailing soul, waiting to be loved.......... the pain of the broken heart. tony

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Muntaqimmushtaq 10 July 2019

Carry on with interest

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Chinedu Dike 05 July 2019

Well expressed thoughts and feelings. An insightful creation, very heartfelt with strong emotions. Thanks for sharing Javid.

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Jazib Kamalvi 05 July 2019

A good start with a nice poem, Aqib Javid Bhat. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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