Tuesday, June 25, 2013

Betrayed Comments

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If I close my eyes, the night won’t be gone;
Deep in the woods, there will be no dawn;
I have journeyed far to lose you to the world,
With memories that often break into a song.
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Natasha Sharma
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Dinesan Madathil 07 July 2013

What is amazing is your near British perfection in the use of diction and strict adherence to the syntactic requisites. When I read your poems, I am lost in your fine tempo of rendering and often miss to see your emotional crisis that might have made you write. All the best Natasha.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 25 June 2013

Sweet thoughts Natasha, well penned. Keep writing.

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