Betrayed Young Lady Poem by Beena Antony Kakkanattu

Betrayed Young Lady

Rating: 4.5


Young lady clad in yellow,
Wearily searching her beloved-
Walked down the mountain side.
She noticed prints of his foot,
Slushy prints on velvet grass.
With deep distress she fell on knee-
No more I need his touch,
No more I need him again, cried she.

Young lady clad in yellow,
Walked depressed to her home,
Drops of tears falling to ground-
Days of laughter quickly gone,
Warmth embrace no more again.
All her hopes rekindled soon-
No more I need his love,
No more I need him again, cried she.

Monday, January 12, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: betrayer
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Poem of a betrayed lady
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ramesh L T 19 May 2019

Heart touching... meaning full tears... Good...

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Sadhasivan 19 May 2019

The agony of beautiful women in Life after the marriage is excellently penned

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Sadhasivan 19 May 2019

Many dreamz after the marriage is torned by most people attitude.your experience is pained godbles

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Dr Antony Theodore 19 May 2019

With deep distress she fell on knee- No more I need his touch, No more I need him again, cried she.- love, relationship, pain. sufferings all well portrayed. tony

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Seenarajan 19 May 2019

Hats off to youyou hold your head high...Heart touching poem.

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Dr Antony Theodore 03 June 2020

Walked depressed to her home, Drops of tears falling to ground- Days of laughter quickly gone, Warmth embrace no more again. a strong decision....... i do not need him anymore...... i will not accept. he is a betrayer...... determination, the strength of the decision. tony

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Jazib Kamalvi 31 May 2019

Write comment. Great poetry, Beena. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

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George Sebatian 21 May 2019

Wow... Looking forward for more... keep it up

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Shobha jose 21 May 2019

Beautiful poem beena

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Basil 20 May 2019

Very nice

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