Wednesday, October 15, 2008

Better And More Glorious Men Comments

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I’m going to a wedding in Colorado,
Taking the highway which snakes up the plateau,
While in the west first rise the Sangre de Cristos and
Then the Front Range; there where all the dells
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Robert Rorabeck
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Joe Osullivan 15 October 2008

that is a great poem. I think you get tighten it up and make it even more compelling. It captures so many aspects of relationships with past and present and family. Also transitions like marriage and choices. great poem

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Robert Rorabeck

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