Better Off Without Poem by Kanas Chan

Better Off Without

Rating: 5.0


She wakes up
In the middle of the ocean
Familiar and strange
A little loneliness
But that's the place she belongs

Tuesday, May 29, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: loneliness,ocean
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 30 May 2018

Witty rendition of words nicely penned with clarity of thought and mind. An insightful creation Kanas. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

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Rajnish Manga 29 May 2018

Wow! ..... One cannot pine for a better place. Since 'that's the place she belongs'. Thanks.

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Robert Murray Smith 29 May 2018

In the oceans of mind all ships sail. ++10

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