red and orange with a hint of yellow
radiantly glowing in the once blue sky
shining down from the heavens above
down onto this once perfect world.
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This poem is unique in my mind because the incorrect grammar is not distracting at all. The thoughts are very well formed and are complete. It's stunning that you have the ability to do that. Bravo.
you are really good descriptive wise its like your there when you read it