Between Two Worlds Poem by Mark Hopwood

Between Two Worlds

Rating: 5.0


All is quiet, all is still
I sit in my room alone
The wind blows outside, cans roll down the road
But I'm nice and warm in my home
Warm and dry, in a comfortable bed
Time goes by very slow
Lonely, bored, depressed and confused
Stuck in with nowhere to go.

Friday, July 15, 2011
Topic(s) of this poem: confused,lonely
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 15 July 2011

Nice poem composed with vivid imagery. I liked the theme very much. Kudos to your skill. Keep it up. I rated it 10. Thanks for sharing..... I shall be highly obliged if you please read and rate my poem 'A busy street' on page 1. Warmest regards Akmal

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