Tuesday, September 22, 2020

Beyond Gray Comments

Rating: 5.0

From this gray surroundings
You can't change me.
As much swate and labour
There is hidden my free laughing.
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dipak adhya
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Varsha M 03 October 2020

Where there is only green The old trees Let me go there.... Let me go there Where lies beauty ambiance...so it's greenery day. Thank-you for your comments.

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L MILTON HANKINS 22 September 2020

This is a fine little poem. I suspect that English is not your first language, but you did a good job of creating a lasting image.

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