Sunday, May 31, 2009

Beyond The Horizon Comments

Rating: 5.0

Beyond the horizon
I behold the eclipse sun,
Birds are looking back
Seeing darkness only darkness then.
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Nigar Sultana
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Ashraful Musaddeq 03 June 2009

This is a nice poem with beautiful idea. I love last few lines most,10+++

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Mimi Fakhira 31 May 2009

Nice... I suggest you, next time, try include more vivid descriptions. It will make your poem a favourite. Still, it's good.10 Regards, MIMI

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rago rago 31 May 2009

you have penned well.........the use of thee often may be averted...........

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