Beyond the horizon
I behold the eclipse sun,
Birds are looking back
Seeing darkness only darkness then.
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Nice... I suggest you, next time, try include more vivid descriptions. It will make your poem a favourite. Still, it's good.10 Regards, MIMI
you have penned well.........the use of thee often may be averted...........
This is a nice poem with beautiful idea. I love last few lines most,10+++