Birchous Slender Felted Cove. Poem by John Kipling Lewis

Birchous Slender Felted Cove.

Rating: 4.1


birchous slender felted cove.
knock tick-tock a cocking load.
ferrous crafted hafted shout.
fibrous clotted sauna spout.
splendorous pollack petal spray.
emancipating conscious grey.
whisper marbled vented cruft.
slumping silent scented snuff.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
K Holoholo 05 November 2007

Very amusing and I like it.

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Kath Moore 05 November 2007

7. Decent so far in a 'Jabberwocky'-ish way. To make it better, read it out loud - there are some places where the meter trips or is otherwise off.

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Brian Beek 05 November 2007

REALLY like this one.... and I did read it aloud and liked it even more.

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Donna Robertson 03 August 2007

My favorite so far. Innovative use of words - I have read this one before, and each time I read it, I am fascinated by the different mental images it brings up.

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John Lewis 01 March 2006

this poem is meant to be read aloud

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