Monday, November 11, 2013

Birds Comments

Rating: 3.5

I woke up to two small birds chirping at my window
they tapped their beaks against the cool glass
their wings flapped with an excitement they could hardly contain
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Rachel Duxbury
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John Brown 11 November 2013

Short, sweet and pretty neat, is what I think.

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Khairul Ahsan 11 November 2013

Oh this is so beautiful! Something so nicely described to begin a day with! Well done! I have a poem titled 'The Sparrow And The Lesson'. If you have time, please do read this and some other poems of mine and tell me if you like any.

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