Tuesday, September 16, 2014

Birth Of A Boy Comments

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Who touches a boy by the Master's plan,
In shaping the course of the future man,
Is dealing with one who is living seed,
That may be the man whom the world shall need
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John Masaitis
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Darlene Walsh 26 September 2014

Children are miracles, a very nice poem. Punctuation, what's that lol. Not my strong point either. And welcome to Poem Hunter. Darla :)

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Sandra Feldman 16 September 2014

That is a beautiful and profound poem Very good insight, nicely written Keep on writing!

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Dr Pintu Mahakul 16 September 2014

Boy can measure the help and joy. Even a girl can do so. Nice poem.

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