Birthstones Mania Poem by Emma Litchfield

Birthstones Mania

Rating: 5.0


garnets red blaze is like a fire in the night
saphire lights up the ocean with a sparkle of light
emeralds make the grass be such a light green.

pearls make snow be such a bright white
aquamarine makes the sky be such a light blue
moonstones make the moon shine in the sky.

The emerald, ruby, topazes, garnets, aquramine, diamond,
amber, pearls, amesest, moonstone, sapphire, and the
periots make the sunset even more, more, and more
beautifuler than before.

-emma

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Adeline Foster 09 April 2014

Dear Emma, there is no such word as 'beautifuler'. More beautiful will do just fine. Since garnets are my favorites, I loved that you started your poem with the best. Read my - Who Am I - Adeline

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 05 July 2011

It was really a great poem written well with nice texture and imagery. Quite descriptive yet interesting. You have done a great job. Well done. Keep on writing. I rated it 10. Please read and rate my poem 'Abortion' on page 4. Warmest regards Akmal

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