Sunday, December 28, 2008

Bitter End Comments

Rating: 4.0

Alienation toward gaudy world around,
Have to suffer from not being loved.
Never perceived superficial disturbance,
Which people endeavor to conquer.
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Mina Mousavi
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Marama Kelly 28 December 2008

Thanks for sharing your thoughts, view and concept. You have expressed well the feelings one undergoes when they see no purpose in life. Everything around has nothing of value or love, and the heart that is empty, cannot comprehend what keeps this on this side of life, hence ending it is the best way to go. Of course, we know that it is not the best way to go, but with everything happening in the world today, it is no wonder people tend to turn this way. There is always hope, and it can be found simply by looking deep within to embrace the beauty and innocence first created. Even when circumstances around say otherwise, life has a meaning and purpose. Who is to say that the purpose in life is to share with others, their thoughts, view and concept of life and living, through the artistic creation of wordplay. This is well worded, well expressed with a good flow and rhythmn, and the message and imagery that comes forth shows so much passion that others could glean from it. Many blessings to you

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