Saturday, August 8, 2015

Bitter Reality Comments

Rating: 4.0

Why does life have to be so unfair?
It's a curse to us who do nothing but care
Why does it have to be so tough?
Our short times together are never enough
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Mary Rodriguez
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Sandra Feldman 08 August 2015

Beautiful sad love poem, one of the best I've lately read. Sorry about the heartache.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 08 August 2015

So nicely envisioned. Stunning expression. The lines those I like most are ....I can see the pain and hear it in your voice I know things would be different if you had a choice You still make me shake with just one touch It's because you are who I want so very much. Thanks for sharing.....10

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