Friday, January 20, 2012

Black Comments

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Black vacuum in my sorrow,
suck me in as if air,
to fight, is futile,
ever large, ever present.
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Quintin van Deventer
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Some great creativity of literature, I adore the way in which you started every verse(sitanza) , and every line signifies the good work of art, this is an interesting poem, I like it The_African_Son

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