Monday, April 2, 2007

Black Beauty Comments

Rating: 5.0

Black as the starlit sky,
Moist as the heavens earth,
I wear my coat of oil,
For God's greatest creation I know.
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Queens gon 16 March 2018

That was ok I could of done better

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Queeny Gona 24 November 2014

Beauty is seen in yr attitude rather than the color dear poet pal! I liked your way of thinking on Beauty!

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Blue Eyes 12 October 2008

i think it is a good poem though it has the complications of the classic poems.

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Henz Timber 20 May 2008

Nice poem, , its a blessing to be black, , better yet am shaking out my oil garments..lol..keep on writting

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