Black Hole Fun Poem by Axley Jade Blaze

Black Hole Fun

Rating: 5.0


I'm falling down
Even further down I go
I'm falling down
Even further than I know
This hole is deep
The walls surround me
I'm chained and gagged
And no help is around me
Do I feel pain?
Or do I feel pleasure?
Is it this madness—
I long for and treasure?
I dig into my flesh
I claw at my skin
How the hell did I get here
When did this begin?
Further and further
I seem to keep falling
Though, in the distance,
I can hear myself calling
Begging and screaming
Shouting—in pain
As I fall even further
As I'm falling, in vain!
It is my cure
THIS IS MY RELEASE
From all the madness,
And the most deranged beliefs
So yeah, I'm down,
I'm down again
Because once you've fallen down
Being 'down' doesn't end.

© copyright 2004-2024 Black Hole Fun Axley Jade Blaze

Saturday, August 4, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: depression,madness
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dev Anand 18 August 2018

Or do I feel pleasure? Is it the madness I long for, and treasure? I dig into my flesh I claw at my skin How the did I get here....a very expressive poem dear poetess. dev

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