I can feel the long,
itching my chest
the color of the sun,
I tried to rest
all this time I'd swear
dawning lies to west.
Waited for too long,
must be too late
since I'd felt,
as an ancient God
now the feeling is sore
and my web still sunless.
Yearning for a gloaming
some told me
that sun fell asleep
tired of a cycle,
and no longer can steer
and nobody can smile.
Yearning for a gloaming some told me that sun fell asleep tired of a cycle, and no longer can steer and nobody can smile. This is great LL. Your first poem, and what kind of poem this is! Excellent! Submit more. I am adding you in my friends list.
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Amazing! Your great poetic talent is so clearly shown through this well penned and poignant write that you must keep it up! 10+++ Well deserved! I honestly like your strength and potential shown in this fantastic, rich in imagery and fine texture write! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City...