neo riddick


Poem by neo riddick

just watching
all around
i spotted beauty... approaches
my curiosity, so high
drinking, talking, touching, kissing lips so soft
later, like forever
shall i indulge?
worth it?
the sunsets
frolicking on a dark beach
soft, dark skin
i never want to go

Neo Juna Riddick
Copyright ©2008 Neo Juna Riddick

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  • Rachel Ann Butler (10/10/2009 4:41:00 AM)

    later, like forever

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  • Amelia Lee (1/11/2009 12:25:00 PM)

    Such a proundly beautiful poem.(Report)Reply

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  • ~ Soldier ~ ~girl~ (1/28/2008 1:08:00 PM)

    this really good this is like something i would read to my boyfriend(Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, January 9, 2008