Bloodie Times Poem by harley brugh

Bloodie Times

Rating: 5.0


can you cut the pain away
i wish my life could just end today
no one wants me
no one likes me
just let me go
just let me go
you want miss me you will see
just let me be
let me die
pleas dont cry
you said you hate me
you said you wish you could kill me
im just making you wish come true
i know you love me i know you do
but know im gone
know im gone
just with a blade
just a rusty bloodie blade

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jennifer Rondeau 12 April 2006

wow thats deep..... but you see that there might be a good side from all this pain better yet its good to realease the hurt you feel.....

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Michelle Pope 09 April 2006

Ok... like last year around august i went through 'a great depression' that lasted months and it SUCKED! ! my friends could tell i was different, i never laughed as hard as i had used to... never was as sarcastic or NE thing else, but i denied it, i said 'IM FINE' but it was all over a guy... and now looking back i it wasn't worth it i wasted those months of my life... i hope this means somethin' it might it might not but i hope it does... dont make the mistake i made... i know how hard it is! -Shell

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