Bloody Mary Poem by chella Death

go look for ur self I dare you see if I care...................................wonderful write by imagery, utterly expressive flowing through eloquence yet ingenious,10++++, thanks for sharing

heard she's scary', said one child 'I heard if u call her name three times she comes out of the......', said another child THE MIRROR.............yes it is very true. you stand in frontof mirror and ask three times from heart, it will materialize.. the real intention is to ask honestly and strive for it.....i liked the poem.....10 read mine friend in mirror....come home....cry not

I truly enjoyed your approach to the subject and legend of Bloody Mary. When I was a teen in Massachusetts and then New Jersey, I guess back in the 80's and north of you, we called it Lizzy Borden. You were supposed to say her name 13 times in a mirror and she was to come and get you. Looking back on it now, what was I thinking? I tried it a couple of times in the mirror to no avail. Your poem brought me back and reminded me of something I had forgotten. That is impressive poetry. Stick with your craft and always remind yourself to not force a poem. Enjoy your gift and remember you were blessed with a talent that a small percentage are given. Look for your inspirations everywhere and you will find them. Your poetry is of a quality that is well beyond your years. Thank you for your comments on mine.10++++++++++++ Mark L. Berryann