Zachery Wilcoxson

Bloody Tears

you'll never know
so what do i care
why does it hurt so much
to know your still out there
to know that what i had is gone
but not gone
within reach
but untouchable
like the wall i built to block out the pain
the pain of losing you
and all those years
as i wipe away
these bloody tears

Poem Submitted: Wednesday, November 11, 2009

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Comments about Bloody Tears by Zachery Wilcoxson

  • Riquetta Elliott (12/30/2011 11:27:00 AM)

    I know how you feel when someone break your heart. I am very attach with your thoughts because the emotion I use to have for someone. Don't give up I know you're going to find someone who loves you. Great poem and keep it up.

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  • i love u babe (tandi) (5/6/2010 8:10:00 PM)

    u wer rite our poems are alike and i love this poem

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  • C. L. (2/23/2010 10:16:00 AM)

    Awesome poem...love how it flows!

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  • Broken Heart (2/4/2010 9:55:00 AM)

    wow! ! great poem! ! .. they r awesome! ! n thnk u for liking my poems! !

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  • Stephanie Starr (11/30/2009 7:34:00 PM)

    wow! dark...I like the way it flows....

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  • Yaci Pachenco (11/23/2009 8:29:00 PM)

    That that is at ones reach, that that runs away one...
    that one can not have...or get... but the worst thing one can do is CRY!

    THAT IS why we take it like a man...

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  • Chrispin Kamara-Johnson (11/17/2009 3:51:00 PM)

    Ilike that within reach but untouchable. good piece of poetry.

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  • Rebecca R. (11/17/2009 12:58:00 PM)

    I voted on you, your only vote, sadly...a 10.

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  • Rebecca R. (11/17/2009 12:53:00 PM)

    Your poetry is written with true feeling and experience that I can relate to...I was once 'emo' and wished for the pain of my life to end, everyday was torture...I finally found love and had it ripped from me, she was there, right in front of me; taunting me, and untouchable. Sorrow is felt by many and your poetry puts my own experiences into perfect words...I'm sorry that life has been so cruel to you, and I'm glad that writing has kept you alive. Your purpose in life is to touch others with simular experiences, don't end it, don't kill yourself, you have importance, love. I hope to read more from you.

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  • Joseph Poewhit (11/11/2009 12:04:00 PM)

    Lots of tears in lost love

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