Blue Smoke In The Woods - Poem by ABD ELHAMID REMILI

it was some silent wintery evening
as my feet took me away for wandering
along the pine forest down the river
the waters were dark, the forest deeper
'at dusk, the weird whispers rise from the trees
the air filled space, spills out a piny breeze
i get the feel of chill as the trees tremble
as the moist dirt makes my feet stumble

somehow i get into the dark blue maze
tall trees go up like giants in misty haze
i catch the glimpse of shady silhouettes
dancing like indians in quite pirouettes

sparking shafts flying from dying fire
the shadows not ever the least, aware
the dancing goes around and around
that i stand bewitched, stuck to the ground'
i woke from a dream on a poetic theme
the pen in hand and the fingers steam
the sky growing dark, leaving no beam
save a dead fire and the shadows unseen

Topic(s) of this poem: EMOTION

Form: Blues Poem

Comments about Blue Smoke In The Woods by ABD ELHAMID REMILI

  • Besma Dziri (4/17/2018 10:08:00 AM)

    So vivid, so refined, so wonderful that I got the whole image in my mind! The wording is as expressive as the beauty of the woods! You interwove the mystery of the dream with the beauty of Nature.. An amazing write, enjoyed it.. I rate 10++++ (Report) Reply

    Cruzero Pablo (4/17/2018 10:22:00 AM)

    Am trullt humbled, and heartily thankful to have you read and commented on my simple words..
    Stay safe. thanks for the rating

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  • Cruzero Pablo (5/23/2015 11:49:00 AM)

    i invite my friends to take a lok at my poetry, and give their feedbacks!
    we all neeed to improve!
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, March 8, 2015

Poem Edited: Sunday, March 8, 2015

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