Bodhisattva Poem by Sarah Arvio

Bodhisattva

Rating: 2.9


The new news is I love you my nudist
the new news is I love you my buddhist

my naked body and budding pleasure
in the weather of your presence

Not whether your presence but how
Oh love a new nodule of neurosis

a posy of new roses proposing
a new era for us nobis pacem

Oh my bodhisattva of new roses
you've saved me from my no-love neurosis

You've saved my old body from the fatwa
Let's lie down in a bed of roses

a pocketful that rings round the rosy
If this is the end of the world my love

let's fall down in bed and die
Let's give a new nod to nothing

Let's give a rosebud to nothing at all
How I love the new roses of nothing

Oh my bodhisattva of nothing
boding I hope no news but this

For our bodies and souls I hope nothing
but the weather of us in our peace

Monday, September 14, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajnish Manga 16 February 2016

let's fall down in bed and die Let's give a new nod to nothing A fantastic interpretation of love, life and the philosophy of Bodhisattva. Very thoughtful.

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Susan Williams 16 February 2016

Interesting use of repetition to advance the poem- -I found Jayatissa's comment below to be a valid and gentle rebuke. Sometimes we writers abuse poetic license to further our own ends with no disregard to the pain we give others when we abuse their religious beliefs.

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 16 February 2016

Not sure with what intentions you used the term Bodhisathva, which is a term used only in the context of Buddhist teaching and carries a very noble and sacred meaning to Buddhists.

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