Bodhisattva Comments

let's fall down in bed and die Let's give a new nod to nothing A fantastic interpretation of love, life and the philosophy of Bodhisattva. Very thoughtful.

Interesting use of repetition to advance the poem- -I found Jayatissa's comment below to be a valid and gentle rebuke. Sometimes we writers abuse poetic license to further our own ends with no disregard to the pain we give others when we abuse their religious beliefs.

Not sure with what intentions you used the term Bodhisathva, which is a term used only in the context of Buddhist teaching and carries a very noble and sacred meaning to Buddhists.