Tuesday, April 24, 2018

Bones For The Poor Comments

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Bones for poor, flesh for rich
Take your water, I'm not a fish
Don't forget this in your speech
I'm still a poor man.
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Jonathan Tafreg
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Dr Antony Theodore 13 May 2018

Marijuana is what you see, But CORRUPTION down your feet, In the school they're selling names, I'm still a poor man...poverty caused by corrupt politicians even when the country is rich in sources. so very well portrayed with real reasoning..... thank u dear poet for this poem. tony

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Diana Rose Tolentino 11 May 2018

I love the indignation in the tone of your poem with regards to the unfairness in the society and farce political promises. Thank you for sharing.

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Jonathan Tafreg 12 May 2018

Thanks for the compliments Diana

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Chinedu Dike 28 April 2018

Brave utterances set aside for honest reflection. Brilliant, thought provoking, intense, focused and factual. Thanks for sharing.

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Jonathan Tafreg 29 April 2018

Thanks a million Chinedu, I'll be seeing you soon

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