Monday, November 23, 2009

Boy Racer Comments

Rating: 5.0

Into the maw of darkness,
the boy racer sped
trying the chase the dreams
that spun around his head.
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David Harris
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Stephen Stirk 04 December 2009

Strong poignant piece. I had a friend who was involved in an accident when he was very young. He was the only survivor. The boy racers tend to use their cars as a status symbol, or a passion wagon. They feel that speed belongs to them, and that they are in complete control. A car is far safer in mature and more experienced hands. They have to pay massive insurance premiums, but the only winners are the insurance companies. I liked your slant on this one David. Best Steve 10

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Tsira Goge 24 November 2009

But on the road the speed becomes more sweet..... I'm sorry - that he did not' hasten slowly'... and.... Boy Racer - the fan of speed- has finished his road fatally... Also that others were lost too.... 10......... Tsira

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Patti Masterman 23 November 2009

Good point here David. No guarantees down here. (smile)

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Carol Gall 23 November 2009

powerful write david well written 10

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