Saturday, June 20, 2020

Brain Rain Comments

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I love it when it rains
Each little droplet,
Makes it a change.
Distractive wind tries to sway it,
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David Lazar
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Susan Williams 26 June 2020

Let the rain come down, Dance its drops against the wind, - - - - nice image and the alliteration of " dance its drops" was very attractive- - Welcome to Poem Hunters!

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