Breaking Down Poem by wendell lack jr.

Breaking Down



As I wake in morning trying to make it good 
See my shadow
A sad silloet of sorrow 
Do you have a day with her I can borrow
Cuz now my heart n soul feels so hollow
Just riding down this road 
Was once warm but now is cold 
Just one more time to hear your voice
That's all it would take but that's yours not my choice to make 
Miss the sound the look the feel the touch 
It still seems like to much
It still feels surreal
Like a dream
Without ur warm light to feelIs it same this time hard for u to heal?
Now love is back to us from our ordeal
Thx to me u know ur passion is still there
Thx to u I know I can love
Can u fly in my air
And once more be my dove?

Do what u must don't forget the dust

Wednesday, July 15, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: come back,dreaming,longing,love and loss,love and pain,missing you
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Allotey Abossey 15 July 2015

Excellent diction and good organisation. Good one there friend

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