Wednesday, June 18, 2008

Breaking Free Comments

Rating: 5.0

The screaming and fighting never end
Most of the time, I just give in
My soul I am loosing more and more each day
From the angry words you always say
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jeannie schmidt
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Romeo Della Valle 22 July 2011

It is not easy but it can be done! Where you are I was many times but through time, I was able to break free, yes indeed! I finally found the magic key to open the handcuff that was holding me for so long to the chair of the PAST! This is a well penned and poignant poem that gives you away! 10+++ Keep inspiring the World with your soulful writes! If time permits, please, read and enjoy my poems titled: WHO AM I? and IN PURSUIT OF HAPPINESS, I hope you enjoy them like I truly enjoyed yours! Love and Peace for always! RDV from New York City! ...

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Al Ramos 19 June 2008

Humpty Dumpty had a great fall, but just maybe he fell on the wong side of the wall. Keep writing and you will break free

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