arianna loshnowsky

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Breaking Point - Poem by arianna loshnowsky

I'm standing on the edge
toes hanging over the ledge
I'm wondering where the breaking point is
I'm standing on the edge thinking and eating some Ritz
I'm wondering where is the best place to jump
then I thought maybe I could just dump
my bag of Ritz over the side
and see which of them died
I'm standing at the edge of ths place
tears streaming down my face
I just lost my bag of Ritz


Comments about Breaking Point by arianna loshnowsky

  • (2/15/2012 12:11:00 AM)

    i love most of her poems but she doesnt suit funny ones! ! ! (Report)Reply

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  • (4/20/2010 4:20:00 AM)

    I love it! lol Just putting the word Ritz in there turns the whole mood around. (Report)Reply

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  • (8/6/2009 7:48:00 PM)

    This poem is a masterpeice. It tells me How life is such a good thing and how good of an idea it is to just hang on instead of let it all go.(if your deppressed and wanna you kno...JUMP) Lol. but anyways nice job <3 (Report)Reply

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  • (5/4/2009 12:38:00 AM)

    I LOVE this! ! once again you floored me.. i love your style and i read your bio and we seem alot alike: D (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, April 28, 2009

Poem Edited: Friday, September 24, 2010


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