Vega Destiny Star

Rookie - 471 Points (03/09/1990 / Hibbing MN)

Breaking Up - Poem by Vega Destiny Star

I though this relationship had everything.
It was you who did got another girlfriend.
Can't a long distance work?
I thought you loved me?
The feeling that I feel are betrayal.
A little shocked and just empty.
Am I a good enough girlfriend?
I have everything you want and more.
I thought we had myriad things in common.
This girl she is much lower than me.
You and her have nothing going on.
The stars aren't shining on your new girlfriend.
Your relationship is meager.
Dump her and go to with the triumphant one.
Soon you shall be with me once more.


Comments about Breaking Up by Vega Destiny Star

  • (5/12/2006 5:57:00 PM)


    the second line is a little confusing, but good. nice questions (Report) Reply

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  • (5/9/2006 6:53:00 AM)


    little shocked and just empty.
    Am I a good enough girlfriend?
    I have everything you want and more.
    I thought we had myriad things in common.
    This girl she is much lower than me.
    You and her have nothing going on.

    This poem I like, hope you write more
    (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, May 5, 2006



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