Breaking Up Poem by Vega Destiny Star

Breaking Up



I though this relationship had everything.
It was you who did got another girlfriend.
Can't a long distance work?
I thought you loved me?
The feeling that I feel are betrayal.
A little shocked and just empty.
Am I a good enough girlfriend?
I have everything you want and more.
I thought we had myriad things in common.
This girl she is much lower than me.
You and her have nothing going on.
The stars aren't shining on your new girlfriend.
Your relationship is meager.
Dump her and go to with the triumphant one.
Soon you shall be with me once more.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nikki White 12 May 2006

the second line is a little confusing, but good. nice questions

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Kee Thampi 09 May 2006

little shocked and just empty. Am I a good enough girlfriend? I have everything you want and more. I thought we had myriad things in common. This girl she is much lower than me. You and her have nothing going on. This poem I like, hope you write more

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