Breath Poem by Bert Dewsbury

Breath

Rating: 3.5


There once was a girl named Amy
Who's breath was both strong and gamey
She said with a sigh
Strong men could die,
If I covered my mouth, who'd blame me

Tuesday, August 18, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: humour
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelly Kurt 18 August 2015

A wonderful limerick, Bert. I had a good laugh. Thanks

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Bert Dewsbury 18 August 2015

Thanks for reading & considering this. I wish more would come to me, but alas that is the only one I have

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Afrooz Jafarinoor 18 August 2015

A well-rhymed joke, but rhyme alone can't make a poem!

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Bert Dewsbury 18 August 2015

Thanks for giving this your consideration. Please look at other poems in the limerick form to see that it is the cadence as well as the rhyme that makes it this form.

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