Sunday, February 25, 2024

Breath Of Life Comments

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The gulp of air,
First breath taken
I felt fear when I breathed in life
I didn't want to be here
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Diana Kouprina
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Sylvia Frances Chan 25 February 2024

A guess-provoking poem, I had to look for the right way to walk upon. Truly a thought-provoking poem, the grammar mistake you must correct first, and then submit this. Very touching poem, but still to ponder upon

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Anil Kumar Panda 25 February 2024

Loved the way you have expressed your thoughts. Nice write.

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