Whisper Dawn

Rookie - 0 Points (July / South Dakota)

Breathe - Poem by Whisper Dawn

When you know love is ended
you feel a soul unmended
A hole inside deeper
than expected
All you want to do is fix it
But some things are broke
and meant to be that way
Life is full of surprises
each and everyday
One life, that now becomes two
makes you wonder
Why it happened to you
At the moment you feel loves burn,
the fire still lingers
and your heart my still yearn
Nothing comes easy,
ending even harder.
But letting go is a start
for things to come better.
Just know that as big as the ache
the soul stays strong and will not break
Another time, More love to come
Take a breath,
breathe right in
and when love comes let it in.

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  • (6/24/2008 4:25:00 PM)


    This poem had an excellant ending. Worthy of any poem. I really wanted to give it a higher score, but I just didn't feel the rest of the poem measured up to the ending. Maybe, it just overshadowed the rest.

    GW62
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  • (6/23/2008 12:26:00 AM)


    'All you want to do is fix it
    But some things are broke
    and meant to be that way'.....

    beautiful lines, full of insight and great understanding...nice work.
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, June 22, 2008



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