Saturday, June 26, 2010

Breathe Comments

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Take in the surroundings
Including the breathtaking sky
Look at all the findings
Given to you by life
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Emily M.Vo
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Maria Shipka 26 June 2010

Oh yes! Just breathe! Deeply and slowly, just as it would be the last.... I already stop :) You see as you have inspired me :) Of course I like your poem... so easy and greatly sounds like every one living being's breath :)

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