Breezy Poem by linda jenkinson


Rating: 4.0

A special breath has been whispering
Around my neck of late-
Some breezes cool us on hot days
Evaporate our accumulated heats.
Yet it's cold here now-
Is that why the breath
Is so warm?
It hits the back of my neck
Even when the breather isn't around
Which astounds me.

I would breathe back of course
But first I must inhale deeper.

Why rush in front of breezes?

Dr.subhendu Kar 09 July 2009

s that why the breath Is so warm? ............. beauty awes being riffled by breath breeze respires by the warmth..............wonderful flow of passion by beauty through imagery imagery,10++++, thanks for sharing

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Sid John Gardner. 07 July 2009

A breath at the neck, is better than a pain in the neck, so remember by heck, that every blooming sec, especialluy on the deck, can breath life into an old wreck. Sid

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Ashraful Musaddeq 20 May 2009

Amazing composition, love it.

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Fay Slimm 12 December 2008

Love this one Linda - it flows and reads aloud well, with it's quirky poetic question at the end, it still lingers, like a warm breath........ great stuff, and keep writing...10 from Fay.

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Sid John Gardner. 10 December 2008

Linda someone gave you a rotten mark to bring down the ten I gave you.Must have been some uncharitable person...... Sid.

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