Broken Poem by Kellykel Keller

Broken

Rating: 4.5


Roses are red. Violets are blue. Just like my heart cause I lost you. You love my good things and my bad. Without you I'm broken, my heart is so sad. I had you this morning but now you are gone. The pain is burning, I feel so wrong. I want you with me, I didn't lie..... When I said I love you, cause for you I'd die.

Kelly

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
~ Jon London ~ 28 June 2008

Hi Kelly, You have definitely written from the heart on this one.....your soul shows strength and with an emotional piece such as this...many will agree with me..that you have an amazing talent....keep expressing *10* best wishes Jon.

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this is a goog poem i like it alot it sounds like you could of went ferther with it but its good

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Aden orie 08 May 2008

thats great, but take it farther than die with you, take love to the extent where only you and her can understand...

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 07 May 2008

an honest write of one's love.keep going keller

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