Kellykel Keller

Rookie (Sep 14 1988 / Hawii)

Broken - Poem by Kellykel Keller

Roses are red. Violets are blue. Just like my heart cause I lost you. You love my good things and my bad. Without you I'm broken, my heart is so sad. I had you this morning but now you are gone. The pain is burning, I feel so wrong. I want you with me, I didn't lie..... When I said I love you, cause for you I'd die.

Kelly


Comments about Broken by Kellykel Keller

  • ~ Jon London ~ (6/28/2008 11:44:00 AM)

    Hi Kelly,

    You have definitely written from the heart on this one.....your soul shows strength and with an emotional piece such as this...many will agree with me..that you have an amazing talent....keep expressing *10*

    best wishes
    Jon.
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  • prince nightmare ~feeling free~ (5/27/2008 11:43:00 AM)

    this is a goog poem i like it alot it sounds like you could of went ferther with it but its good (Report)Reply

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  • Aden orie (5/8/2008 12:15:00 PM)

    thats great, but take it farther than die with you, take love to the extent where only you and her can understand... (Report)Reply

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  • Sulaiman Mohd YusofSulaiman Mohd Yusof (5/7/2008 6:17:00 PM)

    an honest write of one's love.keep going keller (Report)Reply

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  • ~*Emo Princess (Hayley) *~ (5/7/2008 12:35:00 PM)

    omg i want to cry it's a great poem i want it (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, May 7, 2008

Poem Edited: Monday, April 13, 2009


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