Wednesday, August 20, 2008

Broken Comments

Rating: 4.3

i look to the skies
in these lonely moments
listening to the thunder pound
all these thoughts rolling through my mind
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jessie davies
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Ency Bearis 21 August 2008

broken needs to be repaired..pieces to find with the flow of life to evolve...soon to be found with patience... nicely written.... Ency Bearis

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Marvin Brato 20 August 2008

broken pieces missing are somewhere out there... life has to go on, get up and find those pieces to make your life whole again! High marks.

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