Monday, October 27, 2008

Broken Comments

Rating: 5.0

Shattered pecies of what remains
Look at what we had
I told you I would never hurt you in all honesty of my heart
To bad you didn't say the same
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lyle hertenstein
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Karlee O 03 November 2008

Lyle, It's Karlee I've Got To Say This Is BEAUTIFUL... Not Only Are You A Good Artist, But You Rock At This Too..(: I'm Not Sure, But I Have This Big Guess On Who This Is About Chance's Are Im Not Right..(:

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Alayna Bullock 02 November 2008

I think this one is my favorite :) I wishes i knew who it is about.. Lol. :) Im a nosey goose! : D

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Jennifer Spurlock 29 October 2008

heyy lyle.. who dis about? ? well i suppose ill ttyl... peace

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Kesav Easwaran 29 October 2008

broken love feelings well compiled...the poem talks frank and bold through well framed lines...good piece, lyle...10

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