Broken Poem by Alex Black

Broken



You say you like me
But kiss another
You say you wish to date me
But are in a relationship
You say you don't want to hurt me
But everyday I am broken

On the outside I look well
No one knows Im ill
Nights go by
And im still going to cry
The razor becomes my friend
In the end.

Pills seem nice
In my eyes
Please be mine
Just one more time.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Amber S 08 July 2012

i can relate to this cause not everyone in a relationship loves that person like how they used to.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 05 July 2012

There are hundreds of better things to do in life, other than razor, pills and other negative things! Why does this person in this poem wants to get broken again and again by asking one more time? Alex, the first two lines are very catchy..

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