Tuesday, May 5, 2020

Broken Comments

Rating: 4.8

Control
is what I did not have.
Vulnerability
took away my agility.
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Malikah Awan
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Chinedu Dike 26 May 2020

A heart-rending story sadly penned from the heart. A poignant bit of verse. Thanks for sharing, Malikah.

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Jazib Kamalvi 19 May 2020

Write comment. Such a nice start, Malikah. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

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Dr Antony Theodore 19 May 2020

I will forever be broken, as you have never spoken of what sick thoughts went through your mind when you did what you did. How I wish I could shove all these thoughts and emotions in a jar And close the lid. A jar of emotions always closed up.......... fine poem full of emotions and sorrow. experiences of life. tony

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