Broken And Dented / Parts Poem by david gerardino

Broken And Dented / Parts

Rating: 5.0


Theres a static in the air,
a charge or current, a smell
that makes you back away,
then blocks your entrance,
a moment of silence, filled
with tears and dust, a pause
on a time peace, filled with
broken and dented parts,
a hit on the vien, a fall to the
floor, a walk in the darkness,
until your brave enough to open
the door

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 18 July 2011

A very impressive and well penned write. I love the style and texture plus the imagery! This write shows your great TALENT! 10+++ Keep inspiring the World! Love and Peace for always! Romeo

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