Broken Eyes Poem by Anamika Jalan

Broken Eyes

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i breath wind into my windpipe
and, my head is thinking about you
when you will come and take me as a bride
we would start a new journey with soul
and our family would be remembered
you would be my ultimate soul with your love
and, would be a perfect wife for you
but, why are you so cruel in my case,
you made me waiting for you with broken eyes...
NOT FAIR

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vishal Sharma 22 July 2013

poem reflecting love and a pure one love the poem very much

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Khairul Ahsan 22 July 2013

you made me waiting for you with broken eyes... A heart is broken, eyes are not. Instead of 'broken eyes', 'weeping eyes' would suit better.

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