Sunday, August 12, 2007

Broken Feet Footprints Comments

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my first step was a stumble down
back to where I’d come from, the
ground was the only place for me
it held the nothingness, now
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Ben Partenay
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Val Morehouse 18 October 2007

I'm wondering what would happen if you took the line 'broken feet walking broken ground' and remade this idea into a non rhyming but line repeating villanelle? Sure would be fun to try.. Val

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Ben Partenay

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